Going to add one a week, will start off with 3. Warning that they're sorta dark. ![]()
Going to be postin' some poems here. Give me some tips and critique or praise, whatever works! Feel free to +1 if you're cute.
1. So when he commits suicide, what're you going to do?
All you'll be able to see is his face starin' back at you.
As he cries for help, and reaches out his hand
You shrug and turn away, leaving him to stand.
You kick and shove him around, he screams but there's no sound
Every word you throw out just beats and pounds him down.
Be the light and give him hope
Show him how to hold onto the rope
Because all it takes is a little smile
To make someone's life seem worthwhile.
2. Don't make a mistake
It'll shatter your soul
One is all it'll take
To suck you through a hole
The image is like a picture
The actions so vile
After all of the lectures
I'm still in denial
8 years have flown
Since the deed had been run
My heart can't be sewn
My mind is undone
The action was unjust
The wrong time, the wrong place
The event misused trust
I'm rushing through time and space
I wish to forget
To go back and to change
The events from the past
The day of the pain.
I need to change.
I need to move on.
But I'm rendered useless
Because I'm not strong
One mistake is all it takes
To cause you to end your life
Perhaps, it is fate
To live in the afterlife.
3. One for the Christians!
I live with a disorder
A beast inside of me
It makes me out of order
I cannot set it free
The beast will take control
Whenever it may feel
My mind stays on patrol
It tries to break the seal
My actions are unjust
The things I do are cruel
The beast misuses trust
Whenever it may rule.
I try to free myself
Of the chains that hold me down
It threatens to ruin my health
I scream without a sound
There's a beast inside
It threatens to snap
It refuses to hide
It's caught me in it's trap
But a glowing hand rescues me
From this thing made of deceit
A precious thing sent to set me free
The top of the elite.
With help of the Divine
I have broken bonds
Now I can walk and shine
Weak turned into strong.
So praise the love the Father brings
For He is love, and He is King
His mercy is a one track mind
It keeps flowin' til the end of time.
















