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#1 Musikal Time

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Posted 09 April 2012 - 07:54 AM

morning
made warm and mellow by the slanting autumn sun
bathing the hills in a gentle apricot light
slipping through my fingers
giver of life







What do you think? :P
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#2 Jess

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Posted 09 April 2012 - 09:25 AM

Good work, I like it. :D
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#3 Varunky

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Posted 09 April 2012 - 11:37 AM

This is good :yes: . Too bad I'm not a morning person to experience this (or if I am up I'm not paying attention well enough >.<)

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#4 Musikal Time

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Posted 11 April 2012 - 05:44 AM

I'm not that much of a morning person, unless of course I'm still up from the night before. Thank you for your feed back :)
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#5 Herbie

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Posted 13 April 2012 - 09:44 AM

As the setting sun rests its shadow upon the horizon,
a luminous lantern of light takes its place in the empty space above,
as the day-walkers close their tired eyes,
a great owl of the forest takes its absence into the darkness of the night.

#6 Musikal Time

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Posted 13 April 2012 - 09:53 AM

*melts*
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#7 Top Argetlam

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Posted 18 April 2012 - 02:46 PM

Wow, great poem it is really beautiful! I always wake up early to experience the morning ;D. It give me more time to live :D.
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#8 Alfawarlord

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Posted 24 April 2012 - 05:33 AM

I like it too, more please:o

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#9 Ladylee06

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Posted 25 April 2012 - 10:31 AM

Both you and Herbie did a great job =) More more yes please more!